Wednesday, January 29, 2014

"September" Response


I thought Lia Purpura’s “September” was very interesting with its unique look on death.  Her choice of adjectives was particularly intriguing.  The bones were positioned “perfectly” on “soft,” “welcoming” earth.  The cat’s bones were forever placed in a posture of sleep and decomposition of the flesh is described as a “return…to its simplest components.”  The earth is “a home receiving the body in, expecting it.”  All of this suggests that death does not have to be the dreaded stealer of time, or the scythe-wielding demon of pain.  Though Purpura does not deny these are indeed faces death can take on.  She recognizes the historical image of feared death, the monster it has been recorded to be:  “fear is the black cipher of an open mouth, the red oxide smudge on a flank.”  Purpura knows death can be ruthless, but she chooses to write about a death that was natural and understood.  Perhaps her story’s greatest achievement was showing the many masks of death instead of relying retelling a myth older than the cave walls it was painted upon.

3 comments:

  1. Good recognition of the soften adjectives. I think you taught us something.

    So, in some harsh situations it can have an effect to use unexpectedly calm/soft words? Maybe the ironic effect is quite strong.

    Could you describe a fight with this in mind? Hmm. Maybe,

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  2. I love when you said that "death does not have to be the dreaded stealer of time." I think too often we see death as an end or somewhat of a necessary, albeit hated, evil. It is stigmatized as a terrible and harsh addition to reality and it causes us to put our lives into perspective as not to waste a moment. However, I think that your view of death being soft and somewhat comforting in this piece is eye-opening because it seems so ironic in comparison. Thank you for giving me a new outlook on this essay!

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  3. I would have to agree that it is a nice that she is describing death in such a way. Going off Olivia, we all see death as terrible, and to juxtapose our idea of death with one that is considered soft and welcoming is a great way to throw us off our balance. Sometimes writers can, and this will sound silly, juxtapose too hard, causing us to lose our balance completely and tumble over. This switches the focus, but I think she does well to use the juxtaposition as a compliment to our preconceived notions of death.

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